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Deeply regret to advise you Titanic sank this morning, the fifteenth, after a collision with an iceberg resulting in serious loss of life. Further particulars later.

                                                     
Bruce Ismay



At 2:20 AM Atlantic Standard Time on the morning of April 15, 1912, the largest and most luxurious man-made object that had ever been moved, the Royal Mail Steamer (RMS) Titanic, disappeared beneath the calm waters of the North Atlantic about 370 miles or 600 kilometers south-southeast of the coast of Newfoundland, leaving behind her the majority of 2,208 living, breathing human beings— people with families, dreams, hopes, ambitions, and plans— struggling to stay afloat in the frigid ocean water. Among them were the world's richest and most famous and influential individuals, who had been traveling in the luxury of First Class, as well as those who had used their last penny to pay for Third Class passage in hopes of starting a new life in America. There were people of all races and creeds and people who hailed from different places all over the globe. Among the richest was John Jacob Astor IV, an American businessman, real estate builder, investor, inventor, writer, lieutenant colonel in the Spanish-American War, and a prominent member of the Astor family. Astor had been traveling across Europe for a number of months with his young wife Madeleine and when she became pregnant during the trip and expressed her desire that the child be born in America, Astor booked passage on Titanic by purchasing three cabins in First Class at a total cost of $171,600 in today's value. As for the poorest of the passengers, their tickets cost about $900 in today's value and although no one can definitively say who among them was the poorest, it is a well-known fact that First Class passengers were given first accommodations on lifeboats and as such, there were very few, if any, left for the Third Class passengers. Rich or poor, however, panic set in with each individual almost immediately after they hit the water as they desperately looked around them for any sort of floatation device that would lift them at least part of the way out of it and give them some hope of avoiding what would turn out to be an inevitable icy demise due to extreme hypothermia and what is known as “cold shock.”

Hypothermia, a state in which the human body's core temperature drops below that which is required to sustain normal metabolism and body functions, generally begins to set in when the body's temperature drops below 95 degrees Fahrenheit (35 degrees Celsius). Body heat is lost much more quickly in water than it is in air and this ocean water, which was now filled as far as the eye could see with souls who by now had come to the awful realization that their lives were soon to end, was only 28 degrees Fahrenheit (-2 degrees Celsius). Immersion in water so icy would, at first, cause these people to experience shivering, hypertension, tachycardia, and vasoconstriction
— all physiological responses that occur in an effort to preserve heat. Prolonged exposure to these temperatures would cause much more violent shivering, muscle mis-coordination, mild confusion, pale skin, and extremities such as fingers and toes beginning to turn blue. By the time fifteen to thirty minutes had passed, the person would have inevitably frozen to death, and that is exactly what happened to Titanic's victims. Many people think their cause of death was drowning, and for some it may have been, but for most, death came slowly and painfully.

The 711 people who were lucky enough to have secured for themselves a place in one of the too-few lifeboats, most of them First Class women, were forced to watch as their husbands, other family members, friends, acquaintances, and people they didn't even know succumbed to this fate and were forced to listen as, one by one, the voices stopped screaming and the surrounding air fell silent once more. The air was undoubtedly freezing as well, and once all was quiet, one can imagine what must have been going through the minds of the survivors. For these few hundred people in the boats, everything they had ever known in life was gone. It had been taken from them and sent tumbling down to the ocean floor with Titanic when she slipped beneath the waves. What was left? How would they carry on? How would they start over without their belongings and without their loved ones? These questions remained to be answered and the tremendous amount of loss remained to be dealt with, but there were two questions that loomed above all of the others. How could such an enormous “unsinkable” ship break completely in half and founder so easily? How many occurrences contributed to such a terrible disaster? To answer those questions, one must go back even further in time
— to July 29, 1908, for it was on this date that the story of Titanic had its genesis.

In 1908, the most successful British shipping company, the Cunard line (which still exists today), was the rival and the largest source of competition for the company that would birth Titanic
— the White Star Line. Talks between the White Star Line's chairman, J. Bruce Ismay, and American financier, J.P. Morgan, concerning building three of the most majestic ships the world had ever seen had begun long before in mid-1907, but it was on this July day in 1908 that the blueprints for Titanic and her two sister ships were completed and presented before Ismay and other White Star Line executives. Ismay approved of the design and, two days later, authorized the start of the construction.

The incredible size of Titanic and her sisters posed a major engineering problem for the Belfast shipbuilders tasked with the construction, Harland and Wolff, as never before had any shipbuilder attempted to build vessels so large. Titanic and her two sisters, which would eventually be named Olympic and Britannic, were to be identical, but once constructed and fitted out, it was Titanic's slightly heavier weight in gross register tons that secured her place in history as the largest moveable man-made object to have ever existed up to that point in time. She measured 882 feet and 9 inches (just over 296 meters) long and possessed a maximum breadth of 92 feet and 6 inches (just over 28 meters). Her total height from the bottom of her keel to the top level of her bridge and not including her funnels was 104 feet or 32 meters. She weighed 46,328 gross register tons and displaced 52,310 tons of water once afloat. To put this sheer size into perspective, Titanic, if stood on her end, would dwarf the tallest skyscrapers in the world today including the St. Louis Arch, the Golden Gate Bridge, the Statue of Liberty, and the Woolworth Building. Truly a modern marvel for her era, she was also as long as three and a half New York City blocks
and her official launch into the water occurred at 12:15 PM on May 31, 1911 in the presence of Lord Pirrie, who was the director of both Harland and Wolff and the White Star Line, J. Bruce Ismay, and J.P. Morgan as well as 100,000 curious onlookers. It took 22 tons of soap and tallow to lubricate the slipway enough so that Titanic could slide from the place of her construction into the River Lagan. She was then towed out to a fitting-out berth where, over the course of the next year, her engines, funnels, and superstructure were installed and her interior was made to be a virtual floating palace of luxury, boasting an on-board telephone system, a lending library, and a large barber shop. First Class passengers also had the privilege of using an on board swimming pool, a squash court, a Turkish bath, an electric bath, and a Verandah cafe. There was also the Café Parisien, which was located on a sunlit veranda fitted with trellis decorations. Second Class and Third Class were equally luxurious for their respective prices and it was said that a Third Class ticket on Titanic boasted the same amount of luxury as a First Class ticket on other ships of her era.

As far as other elements of her construction, notable features included her double-bottom hull, two thousand steel hull plates, and over three million steel rivets that were hammered in by hand as well as her watertight compartments located within the belly of the ship that themselves contributed to the belief that she was “practically unsinkable.” These watertight compartments were separated by steel bulkheads that were able to be closed in an instant with the press of a switch on the captain's bridge. The problem with these bulkheads, however, was that they unfortunately only rose to the saloon deck, or D-Deck. This meant that in the event of the compartments being opened to the sea, as Titanic took on water and dipped into the ocean, the water would easily fill up the first compartment, spill over the top of the bulkhead at D-Deck and begin to fill up the next compartment. This process would repeat, resulting in the entire ship becoming flooded with water and ultimately causing her to founder. The oversight in the level to which the watertight bulkheads rose within the ship would prove to be a key part of Titanic's untimely undoing, but many other occurrences contributed to this disaster
— so many, in fact, that some believe her sinking to be preordained by God or whichever higher power the particular person happens to believe in. One of these occurrences, a mix-up so simple that had it not contributed to so many deaths would have been almost laughable, was the loss of an ordinary object that could be found almost anywhere. The object was a simple locker key, and it is here that our story truly begins.

David Blair, a British merchant seaman with the White Star Line, was assigned to travel with Titanic on her maiden voyage, serving as her Second Officer. Titanic was due to set sail on April 10, 1912 from the port at Southampton, England, cross the English Channel and dock in Cherbourg, France to pick up extra passengers before traveling to what was then known as Queenstown, Ireland (now called Cobh, Ireland) to do the same. Once she had picked up her passengers in Queenstown, she would depart for the open ocean on her trans-Atlantic run to New York City. Blair had been with Titanic during her trial voyages to test her seaworthiness and was also on board during her final voyage from the Belfast construction location to Southampton. At the last minute, however, the White Star Line decided to have Titanic's sister, Olympic's Chief Officer, Henry Wilde take Blair's position, citing his experience with vessels of Titanic's class as their reason. Blair was sorely disappointed to have been removed from Titanic's command roster, remarking on the occurrence in a postcard to his sister-in-law days before Titanic left Belfast for Southampton:

"This is a magnificent ship. I feel very disappointed that I am not to make her first voyage."

One of Blair's duties as the would-be Second Officer of Titanic was to keep watch over the locker to the supplies for the crow's nest and its key. On April 9, 1912, in his haste to leave the ship so that Officer Wilde could take his place, he took this key with him, presumably by accident, and this was not realized until the next day, when Titanic had already set sail. None of the other officers had a key to the locker and as a result, no one could access it nor its contents, which unfortunately included the binoculars for use in the crow's nest. This minor oversight would prove to be one of the fatal mistakes that cost all but 705 people their lives (Six of the 711 people in the lifeboats died during the night or shortly after rescue the next morning and were buried at sea).

Titanic's maiden voyage was rather uneventful until the night of April 14, 1912, when she was traveling at an average of 21 knots, which was equivalent to 24 miles per hour or 39 kilometers per hour. This was perhaps a poor decision on the part of the commanding officers, but it has often been said that J. Bruce Ismay was somewhat influential in the decision to increase Titanic's speed, saying that he wanted the maiden voyage of the largest passenger liner in the world to make the headlines. The weather during the trans-Atlantic crossing was fairly mild until April 13, 1912, when Titanic crossed a cold weather front and dealt with somewhat choppy waters which eventually died down and gave way to calm seas and clear, cold skies on April 14. On this night, Frederick Fleet and Reginald Lee went on duty as lookouts at around 10:00 PM, relieving their fellow officers, George Symons and Archie Jewell. This particular night was moonless and, as mentioned before, calm, making any ice that happened to be present extremely difficult to see due to there being no waves breaking at the base of the icebergs and no reflection. This difficulty was only increased by the lack of the binoculars that no one could access without Blair's key. The night remained uneventful until one hour and forty minutes after he had taken his place in the crow's nest, one of the two lookouts, Frederick Fleet, saw a faint shadow in the distance, directly ahead of and in the path of Titanic. He immediately rang the crow's nest bell three times, which was the signal for something being ahead of the ship, and then followed this action by using the nest's telephone to place a call to the bridge, where Sixth Officer, James Paul Moody, answered and asked Fleet what he had seen.

ICEBERG, RIGHT AHEAD!

Thirty-seven slow, agonizing seconds passed between the moment that the iceberg was spotted and, despite all frantic efforts to prevent a collision, was struck by Titanic's starboard side. Up until the eventual discovery of her wreck in September of 1985 by Dr. Robert Ballard, it was believed that the iceberg's jagged surface had torn a gash in Titanic's side that was fifty feet or just over fifteen meters long. What had, in fact, actually happened is that as the ice brushed against the steel plates of the ship's hull, the rivets that fastened the plates together were loosened, allowing water to rush inside the ship in between the now open gaps between said hull plates. This damage was done to the outside of four of Titanic's watertight compartments, and it is important to note that she could, in fact, have stayed afloat with these four compartments completely filled with water. The problem arose when the water filled the fourth compartment and, as mentioned previously, spilled over the top of the watertight bulkhead at D-Deck and began to fill up the fifth compartment, repeating the process until it filled the sixth, the seventh, and so on. By this time, Titanic's fate was sealed. The lifeboats, of which there were already too few for everyone aboard, were lowered half full in the rush and the panic, and when all was said and done, Titanic was on the ocean floor, 711 people were in the lifeboats, and roughly 1,500 people were left floundering about in the icy water. One of the lifeboats did go back for survivors, but by then it was far too late.

In the aftermath of the sinking, the RMS Carpathia picked up the survivors out of their lifeboats and, three days later, arrived in New York City. Both a British and an American inquiry into the disaster were conducted in the coming months and laws were ultimately changed in response to such a great loss of human life. One such law that was altered was that it was made absolutely mandatory that a ship carry with her enough lifeboats for everyone aboard, but perhaps the most significant impact the sinking of Titanic made on the world aside from going down in history as one of the most legendary stories ever told was the creation of the International Ice Patrol, which monitors icebergs in the shipping lanes and still exists to this day.

The International Ice Patrol is operated by the Coast Guard of the United States of America but is contributed to by the governments of Belgium, Canada, Denmark, Finland, France, Germany, Greece, Italy, Japan, the Netherlands, Norway, Panama, Poland, Spain, Sweden, and the United Kingdom. It was officially established in 1914 and in direct response to Titanic's sinking. In addition to this, many other things in the world changed, many people's lives were indeed never the same, and the course of history was forever altered as a result of the Titanic disaster. One must wonder, however— what if the key to the locker containing the binoculars had never been accidentally taken off of the ship? What if the lookouts had had the advantage of being able to see further into the distance that night? Would they have seen the iceberg in their path in time to turn? Would Titanic have made it to New York? These are questions that will never be answered, but one fact remains. History was significantly changed, or at the very least, a significant change in history was contributed to by the loss of an object so common that one would never think twice about it— an ordinary locker key.
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This was written in response to a prompt given out by theWrittenRevolution. The assignment was that we had to write about the loss of something, be that a person, something abstract, or an object, but that the writing could not be about the search for said object. The prompt was then made even more difficult by including the restrictions that the loss had to have occurred before 1930 and that this loss in history must have somehow contributed to or affected a story set in the present day. I think it would have been a real challenge for me if I had tried to write something fictional, but luckily for me, I knew of something completely non-fictional that fit the bill perfectly. This literature deviation is the result. I hope you enjoy it.

NOTE: Most of the information contained within this writing came directly from memory after years of extensive research on Titanic and her sister ships, but I did turn to a few minor sources for details about the fitting out, the launch, and about the mix-up with Second Officer David Blair as well as the cost of John Jacob Astor IV's three cabins and the cost of a Third Class cabin. I also used a source to learn a little bit about the International Ice Patrol and those sources are listed below.

1) Main Article on the RMS Titanic
2) Article on David Blair and the Missing Key
3) Article on the International Ice Patrol
4) Article that Includes Information on the Ticket Prices and Their Value Today

EDIT: Oh my gosh! My very first Daily Deviation! I am so incredibly honored! Thank you so much, neurotype!
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For the 102nd anniversary of the Titanic's sinking, an accessible, fascinating narrative about a small detail that led to tragedy: The Key That Changed The World by CarrierNovels ( Featured by neurotype )

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TheMaidenInBlack Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
This is amazing! I'm so happy you got a DD for this, if you hadn't I would have suggested it myself. :XD:

REALLY glad you decided to actually write this down from back when you told me in the chat event. :heart: it came out incredible.
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! I was so surprised when neurotype said they liked it enough for a DD! :jawdrop:
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TheMaidenInBlack Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
:huggle: I wasn't.
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww. :) :hug:
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MamaGizzy Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My mind.... has been seriously blown.
I absolutely love your article and I learned a lot of new and very, very interesting information!
Than you for sharing with the world :)
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, thank you!! :hug:
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MamaGizzy Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
I mean, a key?? Holy cow...
It' really interesting to think about all the possibilities and such that even the smallest changes would have made events turn out.
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed! I love history. It's full of stuff like this! :)
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xMarinx Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am way too obsessed with Titanic (seriously I have dreams about the dang ship) and I love hearing the emotional survivor stories but I also love to hear the more historical and technical things as well. This was a smooth read.  I was impressed with the flow of it and how it had me feeling like I was in the past and present at the same time as they came together so well. Turning to the sources you wanted to make your point was well done because the information is still factual, but maybe not the entire story. It was a fantastic read. :+favlove: 
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so very much! :tighthug:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
I’m very happy for you!!! :iconloveloveplz: :tighthug:
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :heart:
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halocomix Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Has me recall when the Titanic Exhibit visited the Museum Center in Cincinnati. I don't think I've ever quite heard of something so astonishing as the sinking of this Olympic ship, and I certainly don't hope to have a similar experience.

It's always around this time, another anniversary for the Titanic's sinking, that I find myself drawn back to the subject.

This piece was a wonderful read, thank you for sharing!
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Titanic has a special place in my heart and I seek to keep her memory alive as best that I can. I am also a visual artist (digital and traditional) and I have created this as well:

RMS Titanic Memorial (Facebook Cover Photo) by WingsUnchained  
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I went to the Titanic museum in San Diego... It made me cry.... They give you tickets with people's information on them and at the end you get to find out if they survived. I had an eighteen year old woman with a baby boy in second class. She was traveling to America to meet her husband who had been there for a year or so creating a new life for them. During the sinking Madeline Astor gave her shawl to her to wrap the baby in and later her baby was pulled from her arms and thrown into a luggage boat, having been mistaken for a bag. The baby was caught and remained safe. She survived and was reunited with her son and lived on to have a daughter which she named Carpathia. (I have no idea if any of this is true I'm just relaying what I remember they told me from the museum. 
Anyways, that was a very interesting article on the Titanic. Your Daily Deviation was well deserved.
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and it was indeed very true. Her name was Leah Rosen Aks and the baby's name was Frank Phillip Aks. The girl she gave birth to later in life was named Sarah Carpathia Aks in honor of the ship that rescued them. Here's a photo of her and Frank Phillip later in life when he was ten months old. :)

LeahAks by CarrierNovels  
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad she lived. She was so young and her boy was just a baby.... 
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed. It breaks my heart to know that so many did not. I had the honor of being present at the largest Titanic museum in the United States, located in Branson, Missouri, in 2012 for the centennial memorial honoring the victims of the disaster. It was an absolutely beautiful ceremony and we were joined by descendants of Titanic's passengers. They released white doves, had a full orchestra, and lit an eternal flame that will forever burn for those who lost their lives. :heart:

 EternalFlame by CarrierNovels  
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's amazing!!!!! It's thing such as these that promote hope from humanity :)
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I agree wholeheartedly. :)
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GenkiPuck42 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
A very interesting and well-written article! The seemingly minor anecdote of the Titanic's lost locker key is a fascinating for-want-of-a-nail take on one of history's most famous disasters.

Disasters, particularly those that involve a large element of human error, naturally inspire speculation about what, if anything, could have been done to avoid them. I once read somewhere that it is thought that the Titanic might have been better off if it had not tried to turn to avoid the iceberg at all: had it hit the iceberg head-on, the theory goes, the damage to the ship's bow might have been less devastating than the long, rivet-popping scrape along the hull, and the Titanic could, in that case, have conceivably remained afloat. Having researched the Titanic, do you find this idea plausible? (You mentioned that the iceberg was sighted only thirty-seven seconds before the collision; how much was the ship actually able to turn in such a short span of time? How cleanly would it, in fact, have struck the iceberg if no attempt had been made to change course?)
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, thank you for the comment and the in-depth question. Many believe that the damage to Titanic had she struck the iceberg head on would indeed have been much less significant (although highly embarrassing for those at her helm on her maiden voyage with so many news sources following the story). On September 20th, 1911, the HMS Hawke collided with Titanic's sister, Olympic, resulting in the Hawke's bow being mashed flat. The Hawke did indeed remain afloat and was able to make it to port for repairs, as was Olympic, so it seems to me that it is plausible that Titanic could have at least remained afloat long enough for a rescue ship to arrive had she struck the iceberg head on. It should be noted that, during the thirty-seven seconds between the sighting of the iceberg and the collision, Titanic's main steam engines were completely stopped and put "full astern," or in reverse. This was another fatal mistake as all it accomplished was slowing her down and as we know, the faster a ship is moving, the faster she can turn. Had they not stopped and reversed the engines, she may have had just enough time to miss the berg with the faster turning time.
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GenkiPuck42 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
That makes sense. Thank you! (I am impressed by the promptness of your response, as well - your reply was up just minutes after I posted my question!)
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! I've been on and off dA all day. Aww If you have any other questions, please don't hesitate!
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MissDudette Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
Wow, amazing work.  Wonderful story, and it's true on top of that! :clap:
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :hug:
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dramione013 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
I love the Titanic. In 2nd grade the was all I looked up.
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Same here! She fascinates me!
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dramione013 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
It is amazing how much we can learn from her. Because of the Titanic, safety regulations were actually enforcedOMG watch that o_O -above- 
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed! :D
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dramione013 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
It was a shame how they portrayed her in the movie.
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, yes indeed. I despise that film. lol
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dramione013 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014
It was a good love story though
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Albeit completely impossible. lol
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Lagraveer Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
titanic is why I'm scared of boats
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Titanic had fatal design flaws, all of which have been corrected (by law) since her sinking. There's nothing to worry about. :)
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PippinFox Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Fabulous attention to detail and great pacing! I love learning about the Titanic and this key is something I did not know about! 
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I'm glad I could bring some more information to you! :)
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Sinnibelle Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was incredibly well written and intriguing. Congrats on your DD
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :tighthug:
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TheBrokenBride Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
I've always taken an interest in the Titanic, and I'm always happy to come across new information about it, especially when the articles are as well-written as this. Congratulations on the DD =]
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so very much! I have always loved Titanic and her sisters as well! :heart:
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PRTArtist Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Simply amazing.
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :)
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Agent505 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Professional Writer
Nice article and interesting use of period language and headline - I might've guessed this was written in 1914 or so, rather than 2014.  Nice job.  You deserve that DD.
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so very much!! The headline was an actual telegram from J. Bruce Ismay to inform a Mr. Franklin in New York of the disaster.
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wriiist Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
Amazingly written, I was hooked from the first sentence!
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CarrierNovels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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FrankRT Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very insightful.
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